Saturday, March 12, 2011

Weeping Dreams



My dreams were a boulevard of expectations,
Some random thoughts of anticipation,
A raft of hope, in the river of illusion,
But the world kept demanding justification.

Logical weapons ready for annihilation,
My tender dreams… longing protection,
In search of a womb that permits creation,
My tender dreams… dreamt of conception.

I so wish, you hadn’t made those allegations,
I so wish, you could realize the innocent intentions,
I so wish, you had not put me to this deprivation,
I so wish, you had not denied my affection.

What you felt to be mere ostentation,
Was this stupid heart’s true jubilation,
What you thought lacked sophistication,
Were dreams, desires and love sans ornamentation.

Do all simple things have complications?
Or, is it just my fate’s degeneration?
Unable to curb all those ambitions,
These weeping dreams find solace in my compositions. 

12 comments:

  1. Hope is a good thing, may be the best of the things and no good thing ever dies..!
    Stop these tears and see the smiles of your heart..May be you deserve that ...

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  2. I agree Single... hope is the best thing :)

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  3. If you really agree then show us some smiles in your work...! :)

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  4. Sure Single... hope you will reveal your identity then :P

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  5. Okay here is my identity all you need to know
    Name : Anonymous
    Color : Transparent
    Age : X-Y where Y is X+X
    Height: Y-X where X is Y+Y
    Job : Worked for CIA FBI Interpol
    Agent : Secret
    lol :) This should be enough. Now you know me all.

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  6. Wow... that's an impressive profile :P

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  7. well here so far your blogs are the most impressive pieces of work i found..

    We will wait for next incarnation but remember we asked for smiles and not sorrows and tears...

    Have a great day..

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  8. Thanks a lot :) I am sure you will get more of smiles now...

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  9. This is what happens when you praise budding writers... No attention for poor readers.. Assumed star status ? Where are the smiles we asked for ?

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  10. :)
    No.. not at all assumed star status, many pieces in progress but haven't been able to complete any. Hopefully would have something by next week or so...
    Thanks for motivating :)

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